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Monday, May 25, 2020

Returning to school.

Kia ora everyone, today I am going to share my first draft of some writing I have done about returning to school after lock down. Our teacher gave us some instructions to write about how we were feeling about going back to school. How were you feeling going back to school? What could I do to improve my writing?
 
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  1. AnonymousMay 26, 2020 at 12:50 PM

    Hi Lily,
    I like the way you used capital letters. Maybe next time you could put more feeling words because there isn't many. I can see some places were it doesn't make sense on the words on the first paragraph.

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    1. AnonymousAugust 3, 2020 at 11:00 AM

      okay thank you Leo for giving me feed back on my writing about returning to school.

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  2. Mrs CassidyMay 26, 2020 at 8:09 PM

    Hello Lily.
    It's been great seeing you in the morning.
    What have you enjoyed most about being back at school?.
    I have enjoyed catching up with the kids and playing games.

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    1. AnonymousAugust 3, 2020 at 10:58 AM

      I have most enjoyed being back at school is catching up with my friends and making new friends

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  3. Mrs CassidyJune 3, 2020 at 6:48 PM

    Hello Lily.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.

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  4. AnonymousJune 4, 2020 at 2:23 PM

    hi lily

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  5. Mrs CassidyJune 9, 2020 at 6:31 PM

    Hello Lily.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.

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