I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello readers, Today i will be showing you my genially picture of Goldilocks and the three bears. We read the book of Goldilocks and the the three bears.
Great to see that you have gotten your Genialy picture completed. I like how you have described Golidlocks as rude. I think this is a really good word to talk about her behaviour. Next time make sure you are using specific words to talk about what the characters are like and how they behaviour.
Hello Lily, I like how you have put good words in your Genia.ly. I also like that you have included a picture for Goldilocks and the three bears. Bye have a great night looking forward to seeing you tomorrow at school -Angel
Great to see that you have gotten your Genialy picture completed. I like how you have described Golidlocks as rude. I think this is a really good word to talk about her behaviour. Next time make sure you are using specific words to talk about what the characters are like and how they behaviour.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your advice Mrs Mclachlan. Next time I will make my words specific. Bye.
DeleteHello Lily, I like how you have put good words in your Genia.ly. I also like that you have included a picture for Goldilocks and the three bears. Bye have a great night looking forward to seeing you tomorrow at school -Angel
ReplyDeleteThank you Angel. I also like your genialy. Have a good day bye.
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