I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi bloggers welcome back to my blog, today I will be talking about my new class room. Here is a photo of are class room. Here is a picture of my class.
Hello Lily. What a great idea to include a class photo. I just read your introduction and you mentioned that you were going to talk about your classroom.Maybe next time you could tell us what makes the classroom enjoyable for you. What do you like about it? What would you change?. The reason I say this is because you haven't actually told us anything about it but that is what your introduction is about. Have a great week.
Hello Lily.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great idea to include a class photo.
I just read your introduction and you mentioned that you were going to talk about your classroom.Maybe next time you could tell us what makes the classroom enjoyable for you.
What do you like about it?
What would you change?.
The reason I say this is because you haven't actually told us anything about it but that is what your introduction is about.
Have a great week.