Today I will be talking about the Warriors who came to our school yesterday. Three warriors came to visit. One said he was a bus driver. They came all the way from Auckland. They asked us some questions and we had to answer. If we got it correct we got a prize. I won a warriors drink bottle.
Here is a photo.
Today I will be telling you about my waterpark writing. Here is how you write a present tense story.
1. Make sure it is present tense.
2. Use your 5 senses ( feel, taste, hear, see and smell)
3. Make sure you do paragraphs.
4. Do at least 4 or 3 sentences in each paragraphs.
Here is my story.
I hope you like it.
The squealing sounds of excited children fill the air. Ahhhhh the sound of children screaming as they are flying down the slide, my ears start to hurt.
Different smell of food whoop through the air and up my nose. Powerful smells make my stomach rumble.
Kids splashing in the water get me soaking wet. Pool water making waves, caused by kids jumping off the diving boards.
The cold breeze went into my mouth and made my teeth freeze. Chlorine whoop through the air and into my mouth, it tasted like sea salt from the ocean.
Hello readers, Today I will be talking about Winter Sports. Every Friday we play winter sports. There Are eight teams. Football has three teams, Netball has three teams, Hockey has one team and Rugby has one team. I play Netball. The three Netball names are Pulse, Tactix and Magic. My team name is Magic. We have ten players. We play our Netball game's at the Hornby High School. Football, Hockey and Rugby play at Denton Park or the High School.
