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Friday, October 1, 2021

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 Good afternoon readers today I will be showing you my writing. I have been writing about if we should open our borders to visitors. Then I had to pick between Positive or Negative. The topic we were given was that New Zealand should open their borders.  I picked Negative, here is my writing. I hope you like it. 


I think New Zealand should keep its borders shut to all visitors around the world who want to visit New Zealand. There are many reasons. One reason is more covid might come in and spread.  Secondly, more people might come to New Zealand and it will become overcrowded. Lastly if more people come into New Zealand,  they might bring covid 19 with them and we might go back into lockdown for a long time.


If  people with covid 19 come into New Zealand they might spread the virus. When we have more people with the virus come into New Zealand they will be spending a lot of money to get tested. If more people come into New Zealand to visit, covid will spread around the country.


When people come into New Zealand it will become overcrowded. We do not want people from different countries to come to New Zealand because all the shops will be overcrowded and there will be a long line. If more people come into New Zealand, everyone who wants to go shopping for their families will have to wait a long time to get into the shop and then they will become very frustrated.


When people with coid come into New Zealand we will have to be in lockdown for a very long time. We do not want to be in lockdown because we might not be able to go shopping for food and things we need for our house. If we go into lockdown it means we will not be able to go to school to learn.


I think New Zealand should keep their borders closed because we do not want people to come and spread covid around, we do not want  more lock downs. If New Zealand opens its borders then New Zealand will become overcrowded. So I think New Zealand should keep its borders closed.  

 

What is your opinion on this topic?


2 comments:

  1. Thanks for sharing your views Lily.You have given some great points about why you think the borders should stay closed.
    I haven't read all your work as there is one line that is shooting across the page into never never land :),can you change it so that it reads downwards please?.
    Thank you

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  2. I am just leaving this comment to wish you a happy week Lily.Take care.

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