I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Lily, I really like your animation that you have made. I saw that you have done it about returning to school. Next time for at the end you could put a different background because I read it but it was quite hard to read or maybe you could change the colour. -Angel
Hi there cousin, I like your animation. I really like your girls hair it looks pretty. Have a goo day bye.
ReplyDeletethank's cousin. Love you bye.
DeleteHello Lily, I really like your animation that you have made. I saw that you have done it about returning to school. Next time for at the end you could put a different background because I read it but it was quite hard to read or maybe you could change the colour. -Angel
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